OLO my name is Hinemoa from Hay Park School.  yesterday we had a dosirak a dosirak is petado  chiken and rice ball that come with seweed and soy milk  it was very yummy.

This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.

Hear are my favourite sentences please give me feed back.

Wissssssssssssssh! I can feel the breeze racing across my face   as I was running across the soccer field with the Nike soccer ball then i just got half way and I looked at the crowd and sore people holding up banners then I felt amazed so I kept on running and i got near the goal so i kicked  as hard as i could and it went into the goal and i heard a Whistle that was the reaf four half time luchelele i got the Nike soccer ball into the big goal.

Hello my name is Hinemoa from Hay Park school.

                                         
   

                                                     This is my puppet  show.

Little garden thank you schoolkit

Hello my name is Hinemoa and I am from Hay Park School.

Today we got little garden

 to be cintinyoued

footprint

                                   Hello my name is Hinemoa from Hay Park School  in Mt Roskill south.

Today we have been talking about digital footprints and hoe you can monitor your own digital footprints. We pushed CTRL +H to access out history. Then we copied our history  from over the last 24hours. Then we pasted it into a word cloud generator.

                                               

        

                                                   thank you four reading that is all i have time for.

 

chick piping

                                                                          Hello.

We got little chicks but they where egg's when we got them we got them about 4 day's ago and the lade's name was Jo she also bang in with her a incubator egg's light bot water fail and food bow with food be four i give you bad news let me tell you the good news the good news is one of the egg's headache's on the 2nd day and the bad news is that 2 of the chicks one from room 9 and one from room 8 so Jo took them today 7 of the egg's did not hatch they did not make it but that is OK because next term room 8 is getting know egg's because that is the class that did not make it.

          

                                        That is all the time i have thank you for reading.

king of pop footsteps

kia ora

To day we went to the hall and there was a lade there her name was Kate she come from footsteps.

one thing that was challenging was that we had to lerne all thes dancing one was isolate.

i think that kate shold come back to tech hay park school more things

here is a video blowe

thanks for reading